Whatcha Think?!

**ghost ryder** · Feb 8th, 2002, 05:35 AM

what do u guys all think of my freestyle

aiyo fo real, i dont need a record deal
to make all you fake rap *******s look like bums who play with a bottle and make it hum
go chew some gum coz ya breath smell like ass crack
'aiyo nigga why dat??'
coz his face been up russels simmons
'yo dats wack'
i heard ya
dis be lyrical murda
break it down and serve ya
lyrically raping all u mutha****az out there in party land
the beats rubs u up from ya head to ya feet
then the lyrics invade your clothes, u foldin the fold in ya fabric
this **** is like magic
you has-been
i **** shoot ya in white spleen
just like some **** off a movie screen
ya hear me, me and my dawg babyboy hold dis **** down
got it locked up tighter than clinton's daughter, dat ***** chelsea
'hell nah nigga she loose as ****'
well hell dawg just gimme a buck
and ima go propositon her pops, so i can **** his daughter
coz we all know clinton's have a weakness for sex offers
'aiyo nigga u be killin it'
yah but cashmoney made the millions and got da cars and ****
why dont i got dat ****
'nigga u real as ****
u dont need that stuff'
yeah i hear but beware
coz people tend 2 stare
at this paki-nigga who be a thriller
just like dat cat from manilla
i bust a cap in ya skrilla
just fo tryin 2 block my dealer
from sellin me da weed that
i need to proceed with my free...style
i be actin wild
**** u other ho's
wearin pretty clothes but u didnt know
dat ya man be ****in about six other bitches on da side
girl its time u sliiiide, away
just like oasis on definitely maybe
but im not quite sure
what the **** i be the king of metaphors
and lyrical terrorism is a skill full of vision
like the skill ya girl has when she be swallowin my jism

**ghost ryder** · Feb 8th, 2002, 06:20 AM

interesting...

well i hope if u dont like rap u use the fourth option...thats what its there for

**Jamagei** · Feb 8th, 2002, 06:23 AM

Any chance of laying it out in a lyrical format?

**RSINGH** · Feb 8th, 2002, 06:30 AM

lyrical terrorism

Hmmm more like lyrical butchery

j/k

**Arbiter** · Feb 8th, 2002, 06:38 AM

Ghost - It's bollocks.

But don't give up trying.

**ghost ryder** · Feb 8th, 2002, 06:41 AM

Originally posted by Arbiter
Ghost - It's bollocks.

But don't give up trying.

thats your opinion...

do u like rap?? lol

**ghost ryder** · Feb 8th, 2002, 06:46 AM

Originally posted by Jamagei
Any chance of laying it out in a lyrical format?

its done bro...check it

u know i got maaad skillz

**ghost ryder** · Feb 8th, 2002, 06:55 AM

Originally posted by Wally Pipp
Option 6

lol

**Jamagei** · Feb 8th, 2002, 06:57 AM

Well, it's a damn sight better now I can read it. I can follow how it's meant to flow. It's pretty good, the rythmn is there but the lyrics stink. Sorry.

**Jamagei** · Feb 8th, 2002, 06:59 AM

Correction : some of the lyrics stink. Some of them are pretty cool

**ghost ryder** · Feb 8th, 2002, 06:59 AM

Originally posted by Jamagei
Well, it's a damn sight better now I can read it. I can follow how it's meant to flow. It's pretty good, the rythmn is there but the lyrics stink. Sorry.

well its your opinion...consider its all a freestyle

**nabeels786** · Feb 8th, 2002, 07:03 AM

i dont like rap, but its just needs a nice beat..

*pulls out drumsticks*

**Jamagei** · Feb 8th, 2002, 07:04 AM

Yeah, I mean if 'Freestyle' is what I think it is i.e. making it up as you go, then it's pretty good over all. But it tends to jump subject very quickly to other unrelated things.

But yes, it is just my opinion.

**Gary.Lowe** · Feb 8th, 2002, 07:16 AM

I you need a funky bass line, give me a shout.

I AM one of the best Bass players of the north.

I specialise in the groove.

**ghost ryder** · Feb 8th, 2002, 08:35 AM

Originally posted by Gary.Lowe
I you need a funky bass line, give me a shout.

I AM one of the best Bass players of the north.

I specialise in the groove.

yeah go on then bro...hook me up

jamagei...thats why it jumps subject...its coz i was just sayin some **** that was on my mind

if i had penned it then there would be a subject etc etc

**Ali G** · Feb 8th, 2002, 10:49 AM

check me rap wiv M&M, aii

http://www.vbforums.com/showthread.p...hreadid=140554

**ghost ryder** · Feb 8th, 2002, 11:09 AM

Originally posted by goudabuddha
It would be tight but you got all these short lines next to all these huge @$$ long ones. they hafta be about even unless they're just sounding bad in my head.

as far as tha content, it's tite fa sheezy my neezy

well some of the lines are meant to be long...its an effect thing where if there was a beat to it the beat would pause or stretch

but some lines just werent cut up right...jama asked me 2 cut it up so i did it in a bit of a hurry

and respect for recognisin tha lyrics

**goudabuddha** · Feb 8th, 2002, 11:12 AM

What kinda beat is this going to? It's kinda hard to know how it's gonna sound if i can't say it right in meh head.

Fa sheezy, I'm gonna have to ask you to recognize, biatch.

**ghost ryder** · Feb 26th, 2002, 06:01 AM

*ressurects the thread using powers borrowed from pix*

chenko · Feb 26th, 2002, 06:14 AM

dude, im still mad at you for sitting on sockie!!

**ghost ryder** · Feb 26th, 2002, 06:22 AM

Originally posted by chenko
dude, im still mad at you for sitting on sockie!!

hey look bro, i said im sorry, can we just forget it...after all I LOVE EVERYBODY!!

chenko · Feb 26th, 2002, 06:44 AM

Originally posted by ghost ryder

hey look bro, i said im sorry, can we just forget it...after all I LOVE EVERYBODY!!

love everyone enought to sit on sockie... now there wont be any sockie Jr's

*sniff*

parrb!

**Pix** · Feb 26th, 2002, 08:28 AM

poor 'lil sockie

Never mind, my pixie dust will revive him

**ghost ryder** · Feb 26th, 2002, 08:31 AM

Originally posted by Pix
poor 'lil sockie

Never mind, my pixie dust will revive him

YAY!! you rock

and so does your dust!!

*snorts it*

oh what?! not that kind of dust??

**Pix** · Feb 26th, 2002, 08:36 AM

lol

chenko · Feb 26th, 2002, 08:44 AM

Originally posted by Pix
poor 'lil sockie

Never mind, my pixie dust will revive him

ok i dunno what youve done to him, sockie is clean, uh uh, i think hes unwell or somit!

**ghost ryder** · Feb 26th, 2002, 08:45 AM

Originally posted by Pix
lol

indeed, good to see you smile

**Pix** · Feb 26th, 2002, 08:51 AM

Originally posted by chenko

ok i dunno what youve done to him, sockie is clean, uh uh, i think hes unwell or somit!

I thought it was time for his annual wash

chenko · Feb 26th, 2002, 09:02 AM

Originally posted by Pix

I thought it was time for his annual wash

yea guess so

msn playing up agian?

**ghost ryder** · Feb 26th, 2002, 09:11 AM

Originally posted by Pix

I thought it was time for his annual wash

well at least he is ok!

**Pix** · Feb 26th, 2002, 12:09 PM

Originally posted by chenko

yea guess so

msn playing up agian?

yep MSN is still being evil

**ghost ryder** · Feb 26th, 2002, 12:11 PM

Originally posted by Pix

yep MSN is still being evil

msn is a BIIIIAAAACTH!! *bitchslaps nic's msn*

WORK!!

**ghost ryder** · Mar 22nd, 2002, 07:46 AM

*massive ass bump*

chenko · Mar 22nd, 2002, 08:03 AM

Originally posted by ghost ryder
*massive ass bump*

I dont want to know about your arse bumps!!

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