Sorry about the delay - I was away for a while.

The format in terms of headings etc is good (similar to mine), but I think that you should have Education above Work Experience (I'm assuming that it was a short-term thing, with skills that weren't particularly relevant for this).


In terms of each section:
  • I think the Objective section should be expanded on a bit, to explain more explicitly (if you can) what it is that you are aiming for.
  • Within the Work Experience section, I would think that order of the lines should be swapped (the second sounds more impressive).
  • In the "Volunteer" section I think a bit of expansion would be good - such as number of hours per week maybe. Also, do you answer questions on VBF? (which is also voluntary )
  • In Skills/VB I think that "Team-player" should be "Team-member". I'm not sure that self-taught sounds right (even tho I know it shows you are keen), but I don't know how you could word it.
  • In Skills/HTML it may be a good idea to list one or more of the sites you have developed - assuming you are proud of them!


Overall tho, I would be surprised if they threw it out - what you've already got looks good.