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    A poem I wrote awhile ago...

    How many times have you watched the world walk by
    As you sit outside, so humiliated you want to die
    Asking for their change so you can buy yourself some food
    You're just another kid that they talk about in the news
    Politicians pledging all this money and support
    Never seen a dime come out of that fraudulent report
    It's just not enough, times are tough and things are getting worse
    They tell me to get a job, but of course I tried that first
    It's not that we're lazy it's that people won't employ us
    We would love to work but employers just will not trust us
    So you see it's a paradox, we may never have any luck
    Just continue to be beaten up and harassed by rookie cops
    When will it stop? My friends are getting shot
    For all the money they owe for all the drugs that they had bought
    Cuz with no where else to turn to, most of them turn to drugs
    It's a crying shame but y'all don't know this pain
    Were we all destined to live our whole lives in vain?
    Now some of us miss our moms and some of us miss our dads
    But for some both parents are dead and they couldn't be more glad
    But either way were sad, this is not the life we wish we had
    Like all I wanted was for my family to get along
    But instead we're all apart; things could not have gone more wrong
    Now I'm on the street, staving off defeat, must go on, must strong
    Can't keep it up for long, I'm sure no one would notice if one homeless kid was gone...
    What do you guy's think?
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    Re: A poem I wrote awhile ago...

    LightFusion is coding the past...

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    Re: A poem I wrote awhile ago...

    Quote Originally Posted by timeshifter
    LightFusion is coding the past...
    Well you certainly picked the right forum to let that be known...
    PHP in your FACE!

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    Re: A poem I wrote awhile ago...

    It sounds like Tupac

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    Re: A poem I wrote awhile ago...

    It's depressing. Change all the words and it'll be better.
    I don't live here any more.

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    Re: A poem I wrote awhile ago...

    That is a really depressing poem.

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    Re: A poem I wrote awhile ago...

    Life is depressing!

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    Re: A poem I wrote awhile ago...

    Quote Originally Posted by penagate
    Life is depressing!
    Only if you want it to be. It depends on how you live it.

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    Re: A poem I wrote awhile ago...

    Life is what you make of it. If you don't like it, change it.
    Life is one big rock tune

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    Re: A poem I wrote awhile ago...

    I think I'm going to be a millionaire instead of a Archivist. Yes that sounds much better.

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    Re: A poem I wrote awhile ago...

    Go for it dude
    Life is one big rock tune

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    Re: A poem I wrote awhile ago...

    Anarchy sounds much more desirable than this huck of $hit we call democracy... let's try it!

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    Re: A poem I wrote awhile ago...

    Amazing how great you all are at staying on topic...
    PHP in your FACE!

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    Re: A poem I wrote awhile ago...

    Datacide, its a really good poem, i've not heard one quite like it, i've always read happier poems, and ones about memories, never really bothered wiht the sadder more depressing ones, but i must say this is a cracking poem, keep it up mate, theres a talent there.
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