Originally posted by KayJay
One thing that strikes me immediately is the absence of any reference to Time or Cost.

Include them in your "Design Considerations/Methodolgy" section, to justify why this particular approach is the most Cost-Effective and Time-Efficient approach to fullfil the Purpose of the Software

and in the "Software Module" section, to elaborate why a particular product/process has been chosen, though others, maybe better, exist. e.g: Flat-File databases over the Relational ones.

HTH
Thank you for answering! That helped, I've added these.