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  1. May 18th, 2002, 11:43 AM #1
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    first kiss

    i look into your eyes
    you look into mine
    somehow
    we just connect
    im holding you
    your holding me
    we've been together
    all night
    and we both know
    we have to do it
    i whisper in your ear
    those sweet three words
    you whisper them back to me
    we begin
    to lean closer
    you close your eyes
    and like your shadow
    i begin to close mine
    i feel your lips against mine
    the whole world
    just disapeared
    because i know
    me and you
    right now
    are all that matter
    i caress your soft skin
    it seems like
    we've been standing there
    for hours now
    the world is spinning around me
    i can feel your heart beat
    and you can feel mine
    we know that we both have to leave
    yet we cannot let go
    i hear voices around us
    i think people are talking
    but it don't matter
    my phone rings
    let it be
    im so in love right now
    i just can't leave
    but i know i have to
    i let go
    give you a hug
    one last kiss
    good bye



    *a poem i wrote this morning... doubt anyone actually cares to read it, but i posted it anyway....
    Government is another way to say better…than…you.
    It’s like ice but no pick, a murder charge that won’t stick,
    it’s like a whole other world where you can smell the food,
    but you can’t touch the silverware.
    Huh, what luck. Fascism you can vote for.
    Humph, isn’t that sweet?
    And we’re all gonna die some day, because that’s the American way
    -Stone Sour
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  2. May 18th, 2002, 01:32 PM #2
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    wow that was really good!

    wish I could write like that! (especially when english class requires it of me )

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  3. May 18th, 2002, 02:59 PM #3
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    Is it she or he or it dont matter ?
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  4. May 18th, 2002, 06:27 PM #4
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    steve: thanx a lot.... i didn't think it was that good, but i guess its ok... if you want to see more http://members.fortunecity.com/skitchen8/poetry

    Stilleto: its a girl
    Government is another way to say better…than…you.
    It’s like ice but no pick, a murder charge that won’t stick,
    it’s like a whole other world where you can smell the food,
    but you can’t touch the silverware.
    Huh, what luck. Fascism you can vote for.
    Humph, isn’t that sweet?
    And we’re all gonna die some day, because that’s the American way
    -Stone Sour
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  9. May 18th, 2002, 06:40 PM #8
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