Hi,
I'm a young managing director (17) of a firm composed thanks to the help of the school.
This firm should offer spots on the internet, for the shops of my city, by visiting my site (commercial site).

Now, to persuade people to came and see our spots, I think to offer them much other things, like music, horoscope, news etc.

The Web Site should be a guide to consult before going to shopping in my city. I thinked a kind of "virtual page" which permits to visit the city by clicking on the photo of the streets and also directly on the shops.
Here you can see the window with the items sold and what the shop offer.

Do you think it looks good or bad? Any advices?
The prices are very competitives.

Many thanks!