first kiss

i look into your eyes
you look into mine
somehow
we just connect
im holding you
your holding me
we've been together
all night
and we both know
we have to do it
i whisper in your ear
those sweet three words
you whisper them back to me
we begin
to lean closer
you close your eyes
and like your shadow
i begin to close mine
i feel your lips against mine
the whole world
just disapeared
because i know
me and you
right now
are all that matter
i caress your soft skin
it seems like
we've been standing there
for hours now
the world is spinning around me
i can feel your heart beat
and you can feel mine
we know that we both have to leave
yet we cannot let go
i hear voices around us
i think people are talking
but it don't matter
my phone rings
let it be
im so in love right now
i just can't leave
but i know i have to
i let go
give you a hug
one last kiss
good bye



*a poem i wrote this morning... doubt anyone actually cares to read it, but i posted it anyway....

wow that was really good! :eek: :) :cool:

wish I could write like that! (especially when english class requires it of me ;) )

:cool:

Is it she or he or it dont matter ?
:D

steve: thanx a lot.... i didn't think it was that good, but i guess its ok... if you want to see more http://members.fortunecity.com/skitchen8/poetry

Stilleto: its a girl

Fell my boat-man honey :cool: :D

Recoiledinthearmsofagiantmoth

I'm naked in the jam factory :)

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