help a biggener

i relly worked hard on these projects and i was woundering if you could check them out vote on then and give somefeed back if possible. i would relly appreshate it. and if you say you dont have time check out the firts one only then i relly worked hard and would relly like some votes and feed back

heres the fist :D
http://planetsourcecode.com/vb/scrip...31040&lngWId=1

heres the second :cool:
http://planetsourcecode.com/vb/scrip...31037&lngWId=1

heres the third ;)
http://planetsourcecode.com/vb/scrip...31057&lngWId=1

Dude, what's your first language? I'm not saying it meanly or anything, I'm just curious since your location is the US.

i am a relly bad spelling i get it all the time probly because i am a little dislecksick(dont know how to spell it). o ya i am english ya never think that would ya.